OMG..JAd this is truly a very poetic sad piece..u almost speak sadness the way I feel deep inside..
I love it wen I can relate to the words written..

u choose the right wording all the time..and u seem like u pen ur thoughts the way u do feel inside...

My desires turn to dust
As my ambitions into lust
for what can never be
or could have been done.
^^^such a hopeless stanza..
u do a gr8 job..even wen u vent