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by Ronald Edwards Sep 24, 2010 category : Life, society / other
Sweetness on the lips, sour in the soul. Ending long friendships, burrows like a mole. Vile the consumption, though eaten thru the years. Spoken without caution, causing untold tears. Heavenly distraction, subtle are its ways. Destroying interaction, the spirit it decays. An acquired satisfaction, sought after like wolfsbane. Unholy this attraction to profane sugarcane.
by Sunshine
Sweetness on the lips, sour in the soul. Ending long friendships, burrows like a mole. perfect way to begin a poem..I found it pretty amazing..and u used the adjectives in a veryy smart way. another impressing piece!! 5/5