by Andrew
Beautiful poem we all sometimes go through a period of feeling loneliness |
You definitely made your essential points |
Definitely had that sad tone throughout, I have always loved your style and simple imagination - I always think the lines on our palms are interesting - you wouldn't guess how meaning there is behind them. I would have almost liked a separate poem on that, however you took it in a different direction , but I loved it either way. A brilliant write although penned with such sadness. |
by H. Elizabeth
This is very, very, good =) I feel your sadness and pain...I really enjoyed this. |
by Jess
This Is An Amazing Poem. |
by Sunshine
Midnight Blue |
It's been a while since I've read your poems and have to admit I missed them. I can't add to what everyone else has said but this was magnificent as always |
by Deana
Beautifully sad, as with all of your poems it stirs the heart , it reminds me of why I love poetry! Feelings, real and to the core! wonderful! |
by *emmax*
The depth of your words has left me sad...powerful |
by *emmax*
The thing is, this here poem stir deep emotions within my heart, its so deep its unlawful, really lost for words! |
by AngelDust
This is emotionally beautiful but also incredibly sad. It touched me deeply and gave me great inside to how you must be feeling. You worded this brilliantly and I like the layout. A stunning write Lu :-) |