Comments : Midnight Blue

  • 14 years ago

    by Andrew

    Beautiful poem we all sometimes go through a period of feeling loneliness

  • 14 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    You definitely made your essential points
    quite essentially...
    so sad.....'-(
    .......maybe take a deep breath now and then?... followed, of course, by exhaling....;~)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Definitely had that sad tone throughout, I have always loved your style and simple imagination - I always think the lines on our palms are interesting - you wouldn't guess how meaning there is behind them. I would have almost liked a separate poem on that, however you took it in a different direction , but I loved it either way. A brilliant write although penned with such sadness.

  • 14 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    This is very, very, good =) I feel your sadness and pain...I really enjoyed this.

    --Hannah

  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    This Is An Amazing Poem.
    Dont Let ANYBODY tell You Diferently.
    I Loved It And Such Raw Emotion!
    Keep Writing, PLEASE?!?:)
    Im Going To Keep Reading Your Poems=D
    5/5
    It Would Be Great If You Could Comment And Rate My Last Poem? THANKS!

    Much Love, Jessi.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Midnight Blue

    My world within the arms
    of midnight blue
    dangling hopelessly upon
    palm lines
    -unread-
    >> you have made up some very new
    poetic expressions.. I don't think I have
    ever read such descriptive lines..dangling hope;essy upon
    palm lines? VERY sad..very original for me..!
    Really catchy

    Forever ...
    perhaps only a breath away
    teetering on the edge of broken lines
    and the fall -
    of a final rose petal
    >> I feel like some one
    so broken over here..a very sad
    stanza..still adding more
    hopeless and helpless bitterness..

    Oh sky !
    How does the beauty of your moon
    still hang
    `neath my rain> WOw...I am left speechless here..

    And the twinkle of your stars
    shine
    `neath the darkness of my shadows
    >such an unfair image aint it?..thats
    why they say even wen deep inside ur heart
    is dim...the sun will be shining still!

    I,
    a bitter lonely soul
    dying -
    within the arms
    of midnight blue
    >>I can't find better words..to say what I think
    of this poem..I no bet can see my self
    in this piece
    as much as others would see themselves.
    > offcourse at certain levels..because in this piece
    I have seen someone who's life is bitterely dim..
    suffering alone within their unpleasnt life, amid the
    beauty of this world.
    But this remains, my personal image..due
    to my personal experience..sorry for this long comment but..I think
    ur a very inspiring poet!

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  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    It's been a while since I've read your poems and have to admit I missed them. I can't add to what everyone else has said but this was magnificent as always
    excellent

  • 13 years ago

    by Deana

    Beautifully sad, as with all of your poems it stirs the heart , it reminds me of why I love poetry! Feelings, real and to the core! wonderful!

  • 12 years ago

    by *emmax*

    The depth of your words has left me sad...powerful

  • 12 years ago

    by *emmax*

    The thing is, this here poem stir deep emotions within my heart, its so deep its unlawful, really lost for words!

  • 12 years ago

    by AngelDust

    This is emotionally beautiful but also incredibly sad. It touched me deeply and gave me great inside to how you must be feeling. You worded this brilliantly and I like the layout. A stunning write Lu :-)

    Danika.