Awesome =)

If you worked on the flow of this piece it would be great, it was a nice read and I like the subject, not a bad job over all.

"all the things that live inside of me."

I would remove "the"

"I want to walk and watch
all the millions of tiny spots."

The second line needs a bit of reworking to go with the first, just as an example:

I want to walk and watch,
A million tiny spots