I love you,
But do you love me?
Even in my dreams,
You still say no.
I try to talk,
But I think I'm losing my voice.
Can you hear my cries?
Can you feel me breathe?
I don't think I exist,
I look in the mirror and hold my hand out,
Nothing touches.
Am I here?
Do I exist?
If I even exist to you,
Take my hand,
Take me where ever you go,
Where you go I will follow you every step of the way,
I'm lost in a nightmare,
I don't like it in this forsaken place,
With no one around,
I get lonely.
These monsters are surrounding me,
Take my hand,
And rescue me from this
Depressing place.
"I love you,
But do you love me?
Even in my dreams,
You still say no.
I try to talk,
But I think I'm losing my voice.
Can you hear my cries?
Can you feel me breathe?
I don't think I exist"
Perfect imagery portrayed in these opening lines, so I congratulate you, I can see the true emotion in this for example your line "I don't think I exist" such a sad line but the sadness is justified, worthlessness is a killer. 5/5