"I love you,
But do you love me?
Even in my dreams,
You still say no.
I try to talk,
But I think I'm losing my voice.
Can you hear my cries?
Can you feel me breathe?
I don't think I exist"
Perfect imagery portrayed in these opening lines, so I congratulate you, I can see the true emotion in this for example your line "I don't think I exist" such a sad line but the sadness is justified, worthlessness is a killer. 5/5