by Jad
A very good poem that was full of imagery and creativity. I like the way how you described everything in your poem, very neat. The title was a good choice as well, as it pulled me into the poem and starting from line one I was captivated until the end. Good job and keep writing. |
Lovely, absolutely visually lovely... |
I thought this was beautiful, great job, you had me with the first line and held me to the end, nice flow as well. |
by Ingrid
This poem was sweet perfection, wording, imagery..it blew me away. It looks like a format, the way it rhymes and the length of the lines... |
CAn't say more then has been said. Ingrid had it right sweet perfection |
by NightFlyer
Thank you all for your kind words. |
This has my vote. 5/5 |
by Meena Krish
I can just picture that beautiful scenery..with |
Wonderful write all around. |
by Silent
Nice flow and feel. |