A long but meaningful poem. There was a great variety of emotions and ideas scattered across your lines. I liked the way you have once again turn good stories into a wonderful poem for one to read and get all the little hidden messages you have for us: readers. Good job and keep writing.

Brought back memories of my many trips to my grandmother's house. Well done.

This write is a trip down memory lane with
vivid images coming from your story..liked the read :)