Jad,
this style is quite new to me. I like it and you've done an excellent job. I appreciate the explanation at the bottom. Thanks for sharing

Austin, this is a wonderful poem about love. I am impressed with your ability to convey such mature thoughts in your work and yet be so young. You are improving more and more with each work you post.

You have fast become a favorite author, you have flow and emotion, with a vivid imagination. excellent job bro

I like this form and you have done an excellent job making everything in this write flow as well as make sense..good job!!

This is a wonderful poem.
It was a pleasure to read.
Well done.