Comments : The Magical Blend.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    JACey i love it..i love it ..i love it BADLY..was realy magically written..
    i love the very 1st lines..was really inspiring...
    then how you went on and on..wih more magical lines that no bet implies all I have seen in the Awens' image.

    Im impressed BADLY..well done.
    you got a very creative side.
    LIKES IT.added to my fav

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A great piece you have written that has greatly described the picture you were trying to portray. The imagery was simply amazing and outstanding. Creativity flowed endlessly from this piece as you tried to craft your words into a hard picture. The only thing that I thought was bad was how it was short but you have penned this piece with so few words and yet made it so meaningful. Great job and keep writing.