by Angelpixie Sep 27, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I wish i knew the girl looking back at me, |
by Angelpixie
Thanks guys |
Such a fantastic write, you can clearly see the emotions are real, and too me that is better then form or rhythm. |
by Keleena
This is simply put, yet quite expressive. Rhyming here and there, but it's more rhythm that carries you through. The ending is a little ruff but I quite like this a lot. Thank you for sharing. |