I feel like this poem has more potential but the emotion cause me to give it a 5/5 because u can't write one of the best poems but if it lacks emotion and is not geniue its a worthless poem... i can relate to this poem since i wrote something similar once again 5/5

"I seek clarity and connection, for I deeply desire maturity"

This is the line I relate to the most, because I'm always wanting to understand everything and everyone from all sides. Always question always wonder. Quality poem, but that's definitely my favorite line because it's something I strive for.