by Maverick
I really love this piece, and I think the best part is near the start when you talk about the past we keep reliving is leaving us for dead. That's really poignant, well done. This resonates very strongly with me. Well done ! |
by Lu
Great opening Jenn! |
The flow is definitely impeccable, and the message more relative to many than we may want to admit. Very strong words and you have done a great job with this. Definitely a great read! |