by Sylvia
Good job. Your words captured the essence of a storm. |
Meena |
by Lana
Some great lines and expressions. I particularly like |
by Ingrid
Excellent work Meena, although it was a pity you used one syllable that was weak, I so dislike to see "the"in a short and powerful formatted poem, why not try: |
Meena what an excellent job you did with this. The image was perfection |