Comments : The Storm (Nonet)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Good job. Your words captured the essence of a storm.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Meena
    Outstanding Nonet, well done :-)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lana

    Some great lines and expressions. I particularly like

    from a long deep breath sky exhales.

    Nice job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Excellent work Meena, although it was a pity you used one syllable that was weak, I so dislike to see "the"in a short and powerful formatted poem, why not try:

    as trees dance without grace,

    This sounds far more poetical to me:)

    Well done, good wording, imagery

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Meena what an excellent job you did with this. The image was perfection