I agree with Britt, the rhyming in this doesn't feel forced at all.

I also love the idea behind it, it really spoke to me having lost so many people in the past year or so as it's not dark and depressing but really inspirational (perhaps you'd want to recategorise it?).

"To pass it by, to paint its sky
But never to destroy."

My favourite lines for sure. Great work, please keep them coming! xx

Perfectly written flowing poem and subtle rhymes..that tell an awesome story. Your beautiful thoughts turned poetry make this one stand out..not sure but this should be in your featured poetry. Yes its that good :) Very nice write Randy.
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I like it randy it is good thanks for your gift form christopher