Darkness

by ninjamonkey   Oct 1, 2010


Darkness consumes the soul.
I feel it within me eating.
All it wants is your anger nothing more.
The more i feed it the stronger it gets.
Until it consumes my soul entirely.
When it happens nothing can stop it.
People may try but it doesn't work .
When you bottle your anger.
It feeds and grows in the back of your soul.
Once its had its fun it goes back to sleep .
Until you awaken it then it comes out again and consumes a part of you.
If you let it out to much.
It consumes you and becomes who you are.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I see darkness that i don't like good poem :)

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Very true. Full of emotion. Quite well expressed. I love the word choice, it is simple but it manages to express what you want it to express. It's just too bad that anger has stolen so many unprotected souls. *shakes head in sorrow* Oh well, I guess we do what it seems we must and that makes us who we are. Anyway excellent job.

    5/5

    ~MRK

  • 12 years ago

    by Hollow Face

    So much anger! I love it. The flow was perfect and your word choice was nice.
    5/5
    ~Kitty

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Keeping in this kind of anger is just a wish for an explosion.... I agree with that, this poem held strong emotions... and it really does consume you. Nice write :)

  • 13 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    Really good..
    loved it.. perfect flow
    <33 10/10

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