Comments : Darkness

  • 13 years ago

    by M Colella

    Anger is the strongest of emotions. If kept chained and in control then life goes on in a normal fashion. You captured this anger that lives inside each of us. Well done

  • 13 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    Really good..
    loved it.. perfect flow
    <33 10/10

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Keeping in this kind of anger is just a wish for an explosion.... I agree with that, this poem held strong emotions... and it really does consume you. Nice write :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Hollow Face

    So much anger! I love it. The flow was perfect and your word choice was nice.
    5/5
    ~Kitty

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Very true. Full of emotion. Quite well expressed. I love the word choice, it is simple but it manages to express what you want it to express. It's just too bad that anger has stolen so many unprotected souls. *shakes head in sorrow* Oh well, I guess we do what it seems we must and that makes us who we are. Anyway excellent job.

    5/5

    ~MRK

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I see darkness that i don't like good poem :)