Comments : Nightmares Or Dreams?

  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    She's all she's got left.
    She's got herself tonight.

    *In both of these lines I'd change "got" to "has". I really liked the way this poem flowed. It was like a riddle almost. Very well written and easy to understand. Sad though :/ Nice work deary. -Nik*