by ladiiie Oct 2, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I will never forget you |
I agree with Billy Rob. You have a lot of talent behind your writing, but to really make it easier to read and have a smoother flow you need to take out out the slang and abbreviations. Some people really have to work at being good at writing, others just have a talent. You have a great talent that would be better put to use without the slang. |