Comments : In the Day

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Ron, I think you must have been peeking into my mind with this and the grandma poems. It struck a cord with me. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A well done poem that truly makes one think a lot as he/she reads the poem and considers the lines. You seem to be able to write this easily and have a knack for writing them. Good job and keep writing.