Comments : Sorry

  • 14 years ago

    by quiet lullaby

    I loved reading this poem.
    Its short and sweet.

    I have a poem with a similar subject matter.
    Its written from my ex boyfriends point of view,
    the last stanza is me telling him how it is,
    heres a the few lines,
    ~'Now Sweetheart,
    ~All I Ever Wanted Was You In My Arms,
    ~The Way You Giggled Our Last Love Song.
    ~Now Your Gone,
    ~At Long Last.
    ~Stolen Chances,
    ~I'm Afraid Our Time Has Passed'.

    If you get a chance you should check it out.

    Anyways, back to yours, its a great poem, and its empowering when you get over someone like that.

    Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Haha, great read. It's nice to see you in a assertive and positive ;) Keep 'em comin!

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Awwww that's cute..but kinda sad for the girl u left but good for the girl ur wit lol

    Love it darl <3 xxx

    5 frm meeeee