Comments : Just A Machine

  • 14 years ago

    by perfectsonnet

    This is excellent.
    It really gives the un detached image of suicide, and the fustration that a loved one may experience from someone with those thoughts
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    Though there is no doubt of the imagary here, i do think this work would benefit from a bit more emotion, it just seems too cold for the subject matter.
    Still great work regardless.

    5/5