Wow, how emotional and moving and sad.
I've often found my self in a similar mind set. You have captured this beautifully,
there is such an impressive image of despair.
You are greatly talented to write such a deep piece of work.

Well done.

Whoa!!!! i really liked that!!! that is crazii!!! keep writing i wanna read more!!!

That was by far the best poem of my night congrats. 5/5