by Steven Beesley Oct 4, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
So far away are you my sweet, |
Across oceans, I love that title |
Steven, |
In our dreams there is no distance only sweet love and tenderness shared by two that want their special time. |
by Sylvia
Distance may separate us, but love can still flourish. Well done. |
by Jad
A good love poem. You got out your emotions in this piece quite well as you unfolded the story for us(readers) as we read the poem. The flow was good from start to finish as was the meaning in every line. Good job and keep writing. |