Comments : Across Oceans.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A good love poem. You got out your emotions in this piece quite well as you unfolded the story for us(readers) as we read the poem. The flow was good from start to finish as was the meaning in every line. Good job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Distance may separate us, but love can still flourish. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    In our dreams there is no distance only sweet love and tenderness shared by two that want their special time.
    excellent piece

  • 14 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Steven,
    such a sgentle love poem with the purest of emotions. Thanks for sharing

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Across oceans, I love that title
    the whole poem is written with so much
    emotions
    it reminds me of home, far away, the ocean
    is seperating us