I don't think you need to capitalize every word, just important words. Other advice I can give you is that I didn't believe the repetition really fit this poem, it didn't seem like that line went well with the overall mood of the poem. You definitely have a lot to learn but I'm sure you will improve. You've got a good start though.

I sort of liked the repetition myself but then everyone to their own. Reason we don't all dress the same lol
Diifferent, but very enjoyable read

Actually I liked the repetition because I saw it as the prelude to & the reason why the smile opened 5/5...Jim