Love dance

by Patricia   Oct 5, 2010


Listen to my cries
the ones that are silent
they can't be heard
because the screams are louder

listen to my truth
for he knows my true sadness
fix the gaping hole u forgot to close
the one my heart bleeds from
it's hard to live like this

listen to our song
the one i cant forget
it was so beautiful
yet one of us forgot a step
& our rhythm was ruined
no longer are we partners
in this love dance

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  • 14 years ago

    by Patricia

    Thanks, I agree about spelling out my words.. I didn't even realize how sloppy I was writing, it's all that texting we're used to :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollywood

    This was alright but perfecting your writing abilities come first. Spell out all of your words and there you will stand in a better position. Aside from the spelling of the words I liked it. Good job.

    Kortney

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