Comments : Laying Here

  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    The first thing that came to my head sounded so teenage like! I said "duudeeeee" lol....Because i was thinking "dudeeee that was soooo awesome!!"

    Seriously, when people have writers block, they usually aren't very successful at writing about it. At least I dont think they are. I think writers block are boring and they are all the same, but your first stanza craving for inspiration was awesome! I just loved your word choice it made the poem much more interesting, much more easy to relate to!
    Loved it!