Comments : Two Much

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A very emotional piece about expressing ones love for another but wondering if at sometimes you could possibly love someone too much. Good question but at my young age I would have to say that I don't know. :P Still it is evident that you love this person a lot from the lines you wrote that flow pretty good from beginning to the end. Good job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Our life span is numbered
    who knows the length,
    the seasons
    pass by us encumbered.

    This stanza is true. Our life is numbered and
    at any time anything can happen. This write
    makes us think deeply about relationships..do
    we give too much, must we give too much..
    an intersting read :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Loving someone to much can smother them. It is a difficult balance in love and if we don't find that balance we can ruin the relationship. Well done.