Painted Canvas

I honestly think this idea has been so overused as of late, but of course we all have to take our own stab at it and see where we can take the idea. Some words didn't seem to belong, almost as if your thesaurus was helping you at times...however, the idea of the poem and meaning is clear and I can't say it's a bad poem, it's good just a pretty stale idea for a poem for it's been used so many times...but I liked your view & aim at it...Nicely done

Jad you keep growing as a poet. Nice work.

Yup our words are a painted canvas..it has
many emotions and feelings twirling together.
Liked the read :)

Paper is a poet’s canvas as you so very well worded. Excellent piece here Jad, you have aptly explained thoughts before they congeal into words. Thanks for sharing

Well said , and excellently written