All In Vain

by Chris   Oct 6, 2010


Every time I start to believe
I fall and lose everything
Life never stops messing with me
Can't I do something to stop the pain
Can't I just be free
I try every night in vain
Sometimes I hate this place
Sometimes I hate me
You took my heart with a smile
Watching me descend into misery
As I lose feeling in my body
My sanity slipping from me
As you toss my heart to the ground
Leaving me to lose pieces of me

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  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    I love the last line of this poem, more than the actual poem, your structure is good but your flow seems rigid in places, which is hardly noticible because of your good terminology. Not a bad write or read. I do love that last line, very powerful.. deffinatly gets the point accross. IBE

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