For me this was a little confusing to read, having double worded end lines are not a fave of mine anyway but i didnt feel like there was a structure to this, a backbone, it was a messy read, picking up on this and that but not joining it all together - i think the idea is there but it needs to be re-constructed more to be a stronger read. I did like the way you wrote of no ears because of piercing lies ect..that was a good take. IBE

I have a scare when i cut the side of my arm i can relate to this poem alot i have scares