Hold you close

by East Poetry   Oct 7, 2010


Sometimes I lie awake at night,
And wish that you were here.
To feel and hold you close to me,
to never disappear.

Just thinking of your presence,
And your warmth against my side.
And listening to your breathing
like the calming ocean tide.

I think about just holding you,
your legs entwined with mine.
And the feeling of your fingers
moving softly up my spine.

It takes me to a perfect place
Where everything feels right.
and I can not await the day.
When I get you every night.

On endless nights, not alone,
the two of us so near.
I'll hold you close inside my love,
and take away your fear.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Rhymed poetry most often than not show forced emotion. This is one of those exceptions. The flow was also very smooth and peaceful in a way ;)
    Great job. A really nice read. Keep it up
    -X

  • 13 years ago

    by rona

    I LOVE IT

    IF YOU ARE WILLING TO CHAT WITH ME CONTACT ME imlostf

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Perfect abab rhyme sheme unforced and very romantic

  • 13 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Aww, this is beautiful! :) .. so romantic and loving. Have missed your writes and Thanku for visiting and commenting on mine =]
    ( Little Candle)

    All the Best ... Olwin

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessie

    This was incredibly well written, I got so much emotion out of this poem... mainly because you just put in words my exact feelings.

    "And listening to your breathing
    like the calming ocean tide."

    Just beautiful, emotion and imagery I think done perfectly:)

    Well done, I really enjoyed this

    Jessie

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