Love is amazing ad so your poem..nice one

This was incredibly well written, I got so much emotion out of this poem... mainly because you just put in words my exact feelings.

"And listening to your breathing
like the calming ocean tide."

Just beautiful, emotion and imagery I think done perfectly:)

Well done, I really enjoyed this

Jessie

Aww, this is beautiful! :) .. so romantic and loving. Have missed your writes and Thanku for visiting and commenting on mine =]
( Little Candle)

All the Best ... Olwin

Perfect abab rhyme sheme unforced and very romantic

I LOVE IT

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Rhymed poetry most often than not show forced emotion. This is one of those exceptions. The flow was also very smooth and peaceful in a way ;)
Great job. A really nice read. Keep it up
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