Comments : Emptiness

  • 14 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Wow!!! This poem just takes your heart and twists it! The emotion in it was very raw and very real and that is why it is an amazing piece. The stuff we go through hurts, but when we write it out it truly helps and makes wonderful poetry. I thought this poem was amazing! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by LaLaROX

    I love this poem. I am going through the exact say thing. You worded this correctly oh this was beautiful and perfect

  • 14 years ago

    by Maverick

    I'm glad I came back and re-read this.

    I really liked how it's not like stuff had faded away, or even that you were given a reason and then left, it's just straight emptiness, there is nothing there and it's such a hard thing to come face to face with but when it does happen it's so overwhelming and yet you go and write a beautiful poem about it that captures it perfectly. Great job =]