I love the whole piece, I thought the flow was spot on and really my only complaint is that it's not longer lol I will have to take the time to check out some more of your work. Great job and definitely deserving of a nomination.

This is really beautiful:)

I loved the last stanza most, the redemption part. Somehow we so long for that..if only we would realize it is just human to make mistakes and we are always forgiven by our Creator.

Beautiful poem, well done.

5/5 Ingrid

I must thank BC for noticing me.

It is very heartening to know that not making sense to most of the world most of the time is actually not a crime. It pays.

And thanks are due to all of you who took time to go through my wild ramblings. :)

Good poem...Congrats for the WIN...Hope to catch more of your poems.