Comments : I just wanna pull the trigger ; goodbye life .

  • 14 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Aww...this is good...but sad =[ i'm sorry for whatever happend =[

    --Hannah

  • 14 years ago

    by brokenhearted teenage girl

    Yeah i know ..
    nothing happend, I just felt really sad one day and started writing.

    and thankyou. <3

  • 13 years ago

    by brokenhearted teenage girl

    :( it sucks.

  • 13 years ago

    by Blizzard

    Never Give up

    You will close both locks below the window
    You will turn your pain away
    Sometimes Solutions aren't so simple
    Sometimes Goodbye's the only way

    When life leaves us blind
    Love keeps us kind
    Someone's forever thinking about you,
    Someone's there forever when u need 'em most

    I remember one time
    When my world fell apart
    When the shadow of a day
    Has embraced my world in gray

    I remember on day
    When my friends the all pleased me to surrender
    Sometimes beginnings aren't so simple
    And i thought that goodbye is the only way

    I opened up my wallet
    And I saw a small picture
    I held it for a long time
    A picture of my family

    I couldn't believe my eyes
    But then When i turned it over
    My dad wrote this
    "Forever and For Always"

    When ur world is falling apart
    And you are ready to give up
    And everything u did was just a waste of time
    But one day the sun will set for you

    When you feel you're alone
    And out of this screwed world
    Your instincts telling you to run
    But then u stop and think

    You recall your memories and the fun
    The joy and the good times you had
    You listen to your heart
    And you listen to those angles
    they'll see to you
    they'll be your guide

    Do you feel cold and lost in desperation
    you build up all the failures all you've known
    remember all the sadness and frustration
    and let it go, let it go.

    And u stop and give up
    You say that its all your fault alone
    Of bridges u have burn
    You say sorry and you apologize
    Of losing what u don't deserve?

    Is it worthy to give up?!?!

    A poem for you...
    I felt in love with your poems!
    Congrats!!!... :D

  • 13 years ago

    by brokenhearted teenage girl

    Awee, that's an amazing poem!
    thankyouu! :)

    & no it's not worth it, but sometimes it really feels like it's time to giveup, But as you said in your poem; I think of all the good times I had, and my family and friends, and I get this feeling, that it shouldn't be the end.

    & thanks again ! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Blizzard

    Ahh.. You're welcome!

    I like this poem the most.. Cuz Once I was like that. I really thought that this should be the end. But trying to listen to my heart I heard a soft voice telling me Im wrong...And that was me telling myself I was wrong.

    & really your poem, it just made my day yesterday. it reminded me that freaky day...And im so happy i didnt do anything stupid that time...heh...Ahhh it's gonna be a long way till the end of life now...
    I LUW IT. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by brokenhearted teenage girl

    Yeahh, don't end your life.
    there is soo much to live for, trust me.
    it's not even worth it.
    shits bad one day, but shit can get sooo much better the next day.
    don't even worry about it.

    if you need someone to talk to , im here for you :)

    & thankyoou