by Sunshine Oct 9, 2010
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
All June I instill roses in streams; |
`All June I instill roses in streams; |
by chind
Great piece nana! I love the ending, and the truth instilled. I really like what you did with lines 8-9, 17-18 and 26-27. HOW CLEVER! |
Authentic delivery with enough raw, and simultaneously deep, insights to create quite clear communication |
This is great you delivered a strong message that flowed so smoothe and as free as the seasons |
by Meena Krish
It's only as you start losing hope- |