This is brilliant.

Sadly, because I'm a silly boy, I don't fully understand alot of the feelings you were trying to convey. It has a very clear feminine subtext that eludes me, and yet I know it has one.

It's a hectic poem, frenetic naturally.

Only criticism is the use of "littleúns", which I though, was out of place. Perhaps you meant it to be deliberately odd, being as far as I could see the only piece of slang.

Apart from that it flowed nicely, maybe a few lines being a bit too long.

Nice work.

Brilliant..and..
Thank You for giving voice
(again)
to what so many also
do see.......

Sincerely,
a fan