I loved the power emanating through your words. Could invision those words being preached to a gathering crowd rallying on the steps of Capitol hill. Well done. Keep the dream alive.

Very powerful piece! filled with deep emotions, short but i still felt the power of it all. excellent write, keep it up!

This is a good poem with a great theme, unite we stand, devided we fall..nice to see a poem on such topics..5/5

What makes this poem better than most is the simple prose and poignancy.