I know i drink to much
but its because i don't know how
^Capitalize all the "I" in this line and the rest of the poem and it is "drink too much" not "to"

Sorry I am actually going to college now to be a teacher and when I read poems that aren't clean it drives me crazy. :) lol

The poem itself was full of emotion. I could feel desperation and anger.

Keep Writing.
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