Comments : I confess

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Feeling this way about someone but still loving them is a difficult thing to confess. Your words delivered the message very well.

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem has a delightful free flow and is packed with emotion

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Intense

    what was the contest for?

    this almost seemed like you put a lot of yourself into here. made for a very interesting read. thanks for sharing :)

    ~Kuro

  • 14 years ago

    by Maverick

    This is incredible. This captures everything about mind vs. heart and you put it together with great words and it all flowed so nicely, I could learn from ya haha. This is a hard feeling to admit and recognize in oneself, and being able to write about takes a lot of talent. Very well done