TRUE

The only way that
I can find peace
Is to put it off
And rest at ease
^^a very sad writing..but again..i think some times best thing is to ignore the misery that is l living around us..to have some peace as we ignore the burdens that life bestowed ..
But again..we knw there would be a burden that we cant handle.. so chin up :)

sad writing, gd wording..i love the simplicity of it..unforced and am sure many can relate

5/5

Ben, very nice work. We all feel like this at times in our lives. Reminds me of the saying, Don't Rock The Boat.

In the line, I'm too used to The word used should be use I think.

Love your title :] good work my friend :] Nik

I agree with the ladies for once :-) I like your style of writing, it's simply with a lot of emotion or feelings attached.

Well, it certainly is a poem about life. lol. I completely get it 100%. Life is about not thinking about the stress sometimes and the only way we can relax is to not think about it. I do that ALL the time. Great job!! :)