Ingrid's Secret ( for Ingrid de K)

by Sunshine   Oct 16, 2010


To go beyond the sun in streams
Like a warrior inside a child
Upon a day without rain..
One by one, crossing the silver miles
in the face of falling embers
Unfolding journeys as she pens down
a book of endless days..

Where she went all astray through
marble halls ; approaching home
Though anywhere might genuinely be hers..
Yet while an unstill evening fell resting on her shore
Her eyes sank with astonishment,
Watching the sky being tinted by dazzling stars
Just like her youthful dreams,
twinkled too bright, yet been too far

Thus far rowdiness sleeping inside of her
pleading for tomorrow ..a day she yearns to be.
To go beyond the sun in streams,
like a warrior inside a child that already knew
nothing but the taste of sorrow..

Yet-
Dragged faith from the music of
the night..and the light emerging
from the moon.
With innocent eyes, but seducing thighs
In a day without rain
Still beating with a lively heart
Willing to go beyond the sun in streams
Reaching for the sky she once saw painted
with stars..
Where all her youthful wishes, will endlessly beam.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    This is such a beautifully woven dedication.

    You know when someone goes through life finding heartache and sadness around every corner yet ... they still continue on in their journey. That to me is courage!
    And after every rainfall there is a rainbow. And such pot of gold at the end.
    A friend ... who is there at the end waiting for you, to dry your eyes and warm your soul.

    You are a good friend and knowing Ingrid as I have over the years I know ... she cherishes you dearly also.

    Yet-
    Dragged faith from the music of
    the night..and the light emerging
    from the moon.
    With innocent eyes, but seducing thighs
    In a day without rain
    Still beating with a lively heart
    Willing to go beyond the sun in streams
    Reaching for the sky she once saw painted
    with stars..
    Where all her youthful wishes, will endlessly beam.

    ^^^
    I must comment this ending part of your verse.
    It is so very touching and delicately beautiful !

    Beautiful tribute
    Thank you for sharing this wonderful read

  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    "Where she have been mislead all the way through "
    -has

    This was so good, so touching nana! Why be so talented for ?! You express yourself wonderfully! Its pretty hard to write a piece about someone, and you have to know exactly what you want to say for it to come our nicely, and you did that amazingly! KUDOSSSSSS :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A beautiful tribute to a worthy writter
    you never cease to amaze me

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Since the poem is a bit dark..let me explain from where my expressions..came

    To go beyond the sun in streams
    Like a warrior inside a child
    Upon a day without rain..
    ^^^^to go beyond the sun ii streams..as for the yearning of ingrid and her seeking..perchance her dreams

    One by one, crossing the silver miles
    in the face of falling embers
    ^^^^indeed ass time been passing by and she moving on..she was crossing new miles despite the hardships that been there

    Unfolding journeys as she pens down
    a book of endless days^^^the poetry where
    she has written some of her life events..

    Where she have been mislead all the way through
    marble halls ; approaching home
    ^^^sure hardships makes us all feel lost..yet she was approaching him within these hard times..because she was getting closer to God.

    Though anywhere might genuinely be hers..
    ^^^Indeed..anywhere would be hers :)

    Yet while an un-still evening fell resting on her shore
    Her eyes sank with astonishment,
    Watching the sky being tinted by dazzling stars
    Just like her youthful dreams,
    twinkled too bright, yet been too far
    ^^^^
    I had to compare the dreams she longed yet couldnt catch..like the stars..beautifully being looked at..yet out of reach

    Thus far rowdiness sleeping inside of her
    pleading for tomorrow ..a day she yearns to be.
    To go beyond the sun in streams,
    like a warrior inside a child that already knew
    nothing but the taste of sorrow..
    ^^^^^this pain thats sleeping inside of her..which she seeks 2morrow badly..inorder to let go of..knowing that indeed this warrior who thrived in her..since she was a kid..knew nothing but disappointment and hurt

    Yet-
    Dragged faith from the music of
    the night..and the light emerging
    from the moon.>>>her faith in God..
    With innocent eyes, but seducing thighs
    In a day without rain
    ^^^she is a gd person...a gd looking lady..
    has nothing but her
    Still beating with a lively heart>>well she is such a person full of life still...

    Willing to go beyond the sun in streams..who yet didnt give up on the dreams she got..
    Reaching for the sky she once saw painted
    with stars..
    Where all her youthful wishes, will endlessly beam...which am sure she will grab
    :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You know me very well, Nana. This poem is me in a nutshell:)

    If I had one wish, it would be you could be my child:)

    God loves us all, sweet girl, no one excluded:)

    A huge hug for you <3

    Love you:)

    5/5 Ingrid

    Thank you so very much for this present, I don't know what else to say!

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