Comments : Open Your Fu*%in Eyes

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    This is what God created,
    So don't you run away.
    Sit your Ass right there,
    Keep your eyes faced my way.
    Ashs to Ashs,
    And Fu*%in dust to dust
    I Slowly Slit These Wrist,
    As your face turns to Disgust.

    I love this stanza, you could see the picture playing through. How much hatred you have for this person and the way you want them to feel is so raw & brilliant :).

    Amazing Poem
    5/5