Randy, I like how you used nature and love together here. Your words transported me to each of the places in your poem. Well done.

Nature is truely amazing. I can't say I have a favorite season, maybe fall . It's strange how love and nature seem to make a perfect poem. Again you woke the reader to a masterpiece

Awww, this is an exceptional write Randy... So full of warmth and feeling, that once again transported us as all your poems do!!

LOVED it so much......

Exquisite my friend :D
Lol, Olwin.

NF
Well penned, the rhyme was great
( though I would have another go with the very last line) Your choice of word were very desciptive and not forced.
Lake Massapoag ( large water) looks beautiful
http://sailmyc.org/

Thank you for all your kind words. Yeah, Ronald, this poem was inspired by a walk I took to Lake Massapoag in my town. And I got the idea after I called my good friend who I left behind when I moved from Florida. And I took your advice, and improved the last line. Thanks.

Hi my friend i love this
raw poem about YOUR view
of nature and an area that
you sound as though you love?

I dont know where Massapoag
is but it sounds as beautiful as
my citys outer limits and greenspaces
The Peak District in Yorkshire..well written Paul x