This sentiment is very nicely packaked and woul look great on a card. I felt it deep in my heart. Your poem is beatifully written and nothing is lost in its simple word choice . I love it

I like the way this poem rolls along, it seems, and feels like a true sequence of feelings and thoughts. I like the concise nature of the poem, you managed to fit such powerful feelings in an efficient number of words. It really speaks out and grips the reader. Good job !

A beautiful piece. Reading it was a delight because of the fluid composition. Short and precise.

Wonderful piece. Great descriptions fabulous word choice.

Great . you dont want to love that person anymore so you dont want to be with them because when you are with them you fall for them. thats what i got from it

Aww that was a really good poem...it really showed how you felt....

it was sincere and genuine .... it's a torn feeling huh? but keep writing

A very good peice!
i found this poem very sad, and something i can definatly relate too, got a friend in a similar situation atm so may show it to him aswel..

i enjoyed the flow, almost rolled of the tounge

short but sweet, i liked it!

keep it up!