by Robert Daniel Long Oct 19, 2010
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I rise up |
by Sylvia
Your words have conveyed a powerful message. I like how you took lines from the first verse to end the poem. Overall it is well written. The only thing I would suggest is to take out all those ........... They are distracting and I don't think they add anything to your work. |