Comments : Still I Smoke

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Woh!... An intoxicating write :) Lol. Never knew there was SO many chemicals in cigarettes! Unreal.
    Well penned Sylvia :]

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    And I still crave a smoke from time to time. Even though i never really got deep into it and it didn't last long.
    excellent poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Daniel Long

    Very well versed puts a new perspective on nasty cigarettes

  • 14 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Its a shame what addiction does to us, the death hold is incredible .......... I wish you strength,power and determination to quit

  • 14 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Excellent poem, Sylvia. I thankfully don't smoke, but I lived in a household where everyone smoked profusely. Their smoke would make my eyes water, and people around me would say that I smelled like cigarettes. Your poem is an eye-opener to a very unhealthy habit, so hard to break.

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Sometimes even the fact we knew something is not good for us, we find it hard to abondoned it. I have had temptations many times to start smoking, but i find other ways to ease it. I think it is very hard to quit, but little by little, if you cut down on your daily use then it's the first step. Unhealthy habit is something we can't help, and if we are force to do, then we might returned to our same old self. After all life without temptation is only an imitation of living. Seeing someone smoking is soo contagious.

  • 14 years ago

    by Rania

    And still I smoke, I've tried everything, this is the hardest addiction to quit. Still the damage is done and I keep lighting up !!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    Great poem 5/5!
    I Really Enjoyed The Creativity!
    Keep Writing!
    Will You Please Rate And Comment One Of My Poems Too?
    Thanks And Great day To You!
    -Jessi.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    There are poems of beauty , poems of pain
    Poems of love & poems of nature . But here my friend you have touched on my favorite one of all ! Poems of Purpose. They give peotry in motion to life itself & lend beauty to truth & you have penned this one so amazingly well I can't help but nominate it for the contest & add it to my favorites list.
    Thank you so much for sharing this one with us all. 5/5 ...Jim