by tainted melody Oct 19, 2010
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
He fools us into thinking |
by White Orchid
I loved this poem!! It certainly was a spiritual poem about Satan's crafty designs and how easy it is to be blinded by them and not even realize. I loved how you compared him to a puppet master. It was easy to picture it, and that is how you know you have written something well if the person reading it can imagine it. Nice poem. I loved the whole thing. :) |